Dude, aside from the beautiful way that you set the scene, the believability of the interactions, the dialogue that was just so flowy (it's a word), the thing that I love, love, loved most about this was the parallel in plot. How you took canon facts and reworked them to fit into this gorgeous AU setting is something that I haven't seen done very often. Or as well, for that matter.
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Dude, aside from the beautiful way that you set the scene, the believability of the interactions, the dialogue that was just so flowy (it's a word), the thing that I love, love, loved most about this was the parallel in plot. How you took canon facts and reworked them to fit into this gorgeous AU setting is something that I haven't seen done very often. Or as well, for that matter.
Totally glad I stalked this fic. &hearts