That was really really sweet! It's so hard to find good MattxNear fics that actually tell a story and are not only mindless porn ... I loved the way you characterized everyone, not only Matt and Near but Mello and especially L too, though subtle! Very well done! The polish background was an interesting twist, too! I've never seen that ... I usually have him Irish-American *lach*
I'm sure I'll come back and read this fic a couple of times again! It flows very nice, is easy to follow without being simple and has nice funny subtones under the alltoghther serious sound of it ^^ I'll definitly show this to my Near too x3
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Date: 2008-04-25 08:04 am (UTC)I loved the way you characterized everyone, not only Matt and Near but Mello and especially L too, though subtle! Very well done!
The polish background was an interesting twist, too! I've never seen that ... I usually have him Irish-American *lach*
I'm sure I'll come back and read this fic a couple of times again! It flows very nice, is easy to follow without being simple and has nice funny subtones under the alltoghther serious sound of it ^^ I'll definitly show this to my Near too x3