I really shouldn't love it. I don't usually like anything that has Matt as seme (I honestly have no idea why it grates so much against me - even when it's almost-reluctantly, or just through anger and hurt) and I have an irrational hatred for almost any fiction written in the second person, but you've written this so perfectly that I can't help myself. Everything about it is spot on. It's got me shivering and I absolutely adore it.
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winterfish
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Date: 2010-10-04 11:47 pm (UTC)I really shouldn't love it. I don't usually like anything that has Matt as seme (I honestly have no idea why it grates so much against me - even when it's almost-reluctantly, or just through anger and hurt) and I have an irrational hatred for almost any fiction written in the second person, but you've written this so perfectly that I can't help myself. Everything about it is spot on. It's got me shivering and I absolutely adore it.
So very well done. Thank you for posting it. ♥