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darklunaSomething that started life as a drabble two days ago is keeping me awake tonight and closing in on 1000 words.
My favorite bit so far? This one:
That's what they don't tell you about love at first sight, he thought, with deliberate grim humour. It actually feels like shit.
My favorite bit so far? This one:
That's what they don't tell you about love at first sight, he thought, with deliberate grim humour. It actually feels like shit.
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Date: 2007-07-17 06:54 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2007-07-17 06:58 am (UTC)I figured it wasn't half bad when it made me say "Oh, Alphons" even though I'm the one who wrote it. :)
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Date: 2007-07-17 07:01 am (UTC)*pokes* do you still read WIP? Not to pressure... it's a LONG beasty... that is almost over... well, in 5 chapters. GEH... I must be Russian SOMEWHERE in the lineage!
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Date: 2007-07-17 07:03 am (UTC)I could make for you special filter, maybe? ;-) That way you could see this thing, and I could get the feedback I crave.
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Date: 2007-07-17 07:05 am (UTC)(Heee... it's worth your while to get to the end of 45. Smexxings... for the first time in a Loooong time for them. School and life ate them! They lived through it and made up for lost time.)
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Date: 2007-07-17 07:06 am (UTC)Hurrah! My job is getting slow, so I can try to catch up. And I will post some bits of my (much teenier) WIP for you.
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Date: 2007-07-17 07:10 am (UTC)Dog likes it too. XD It doesn't hurt that the new job got him a MUCH more regular schedule for walking... 2x a day and an air conditioning.